Music

Music

A Poem by Sophie
"

a QWERTY poem, its about music... somehow

"

Queen-like, wonderfully elegant, rays to your unending illuminated opus, pretending

a song, days forgotten, greater highs jested, kingdoms lit

zealously, xylophones caressed, vibrations bring noise. Music.

© 2012 Sophie


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Sophie
a QWERTY poem

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I've never heard of a qwerty poem, but since you've written every type of poetry there is..I'm not surprised to have found one by you.
Well this is clearly tougher than it looks as you are quite limited on letters such as "x" and "z" but you seemed to have gotten along quite fine.
This really does represent music...or at least enough of it does.
I thought this was really nice Sophie, 26 words that seem to be getting along just fine:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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That's a new type to me, great job! It's beautiful! Awesome writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've never heard of a qwerty poem, but since you've written every type of poetry there is..I'm not surprised to have found one by you.
Well this is clearly tougher than it looks as you are quite limited on letters such as "x" and "z" but you seemed to have gotten along quite fine.
This really does represent music...or at least enough of it does.
I thought this was really nice Sophie, 26 words that seem to be getting along just fine:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice use of words to give meaning to the word music. I like the flow of words and the strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short but wonderful...well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I admire how you are experimenting with different styles. Great job, Sophie, and thank you for your read request.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay. That's different.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting,my dear friend, interesting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely, it really captures the power and beauty of music. You worked with the QWERTY format quite nicely, and I don't really think it lost anything that way. Brilliant, keep it up! By the way, this piece won an award in my QWERTY Challenge!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sophie, this is really great. It makes me want to pick up my flute again and retake some piano lessons. I feel it and hear it as I read on. This is awesome. Good job!(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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