Red

a haiku AND a acrostic, I'm so proud.

Roses that bloom,blood,
Energy, passion, and rage
Danger and blood. Red.

Author's Note

OMG! it's acrostic AND haiku! Not my favorite, but yeah...

Reviews

[Odayin]

Wow, just the simple add on that it's an acrostic and a haiku is amazing already. By the words themselves are beautiful. I love the cause and effect routine with the many different reasons, emotions, or objects that can get red to spill over the canvas we know as Earth.
Each word feels like it could be held up to a microscope and be able to spot little meanings crawling all over them.
Okay, maybe that was a little much,
But I do love the poem and the words you chose. Really nice job Sophie

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I like it really!, its so simple, and emphasising with the - R - :)

[Tegon Maus]

Wow... way beyond me kiddo

[Abbie]

I must say Sophie, this was a pretty good job. I could never have fit a haiku and an acrostic into one poem! pretty impressive and the few words that you used really fit.I do like some of your other poems better, but it was really good!keep it up :)

~Abagail~

[Archia]

Two in one, I'm impressed. Actually I do think it's pretty amazing that you could do a haiku and an acrostic at the same time, and even if you take away that fact it's still good.

[Bridger Hall]

hey! i like this a lot! i usually dont fall much for the short stuff... but RED is my favorite color. and i can post it to energy passion and especially rage. danger obviously and blood comes from danger and rage :) you´re good.

[bethany cullen]

So much said in so little words , not one wasted x

[Adalynn]

It's good

Adalynn

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Maybe not your favorite but i like it....

[Asb]

energy, passion and rage...
it's nice :)