Blank Pages

Blank Pages

A Poem by Sophie
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I kind of hate this....possibly.

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Blank pages always scare me.

Like I MUST fill them.

Is that strange?

That when I turn the page,

I'm filled with horror?


I forget what I'm supposed to write

when I see the glaring lines of black

and paper of white

There's so much pressure!

And so many ideas

but when my pen begins to write,

I forget my fears.


For I know,

that then

the page isn't blank anymore

And now, there are new lines

ones that swirl and curve

and they say,

on my not-so-blank-page

“Blank pages always scare me.”

© 2012 Sophie


Author's Note

Sophie
I might hate this, but I'm really not sure...

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Not so much for me. I think this is rambling... you're looking for something to say and haven't decided what it should be... like static electricity. It’s just a random discharge. I don’t hate it but I've seen you do better. Don’t think about it just write it down let it sit for a couple of days and then go back and read it.
I have the same problem... I write when I’m tired and think “God I’m good ! Pure gold !” Then the next day I read it and wonder “What the hell was I thinking? This is crap ! Who wrote this tripe ?”


Posted 12 Years Ago


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I don't think you have any reason to hate this, I really enjoyed it. I loved the last line, and how it ties the rest together.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it... its not my fav of yours but its still good I like the end how your poem was about writing the poem lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


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