Prologue

Prologue

“Once upon a time...” All the best stories start with 'once upon a time', don't they? The magical stories, the stories of love and loss and finding them again, when pumpkins turn into coaches, and glass slippers don't cut your feet. Ah, yes, the fairytales. “In a land not so far from here...” Oh, mixing things up, are we? “Well, I won't start with the introduction, let's just start.”

This is no fairytale.

There is definitely loss, definitely transformations, and definitely blood. This is not a fairytale, and I'll warn you: it's no easy ride, and there's only sort of a happy ending. Well, it's happy for the main character, I suppose...

Author's Note

the chapters will not be this short! promise!
reviews please!
I'm doing something different with this, I'm writing all the big scenes as i have inspiration for them, so chapters may take a while

Reviews

[Persona]

This is a great opening and very appealing! I love direct address in a story! I love the idea of the speaker changing their mind too 'I suppose' because it makes you guess right from the start - 'does the character die?' 'Do they get hurt, but it turns out well?'

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

An interesting opening. It makes me want to know where it's going. Looking forward to reading more.

[deepblue04]

appealing opening.

[WingsToFly]

A nice opening. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good introduction. Short and to the point. Thank you for sharing the introduction.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

Very interesting. I love the introduction. Can't wait to find out what happens next

[Lacha Young]

i love the engery your giving on this one.!

[Taylor Ann]

I love this beginning! It's such a modern day tone, but the mood is...suspicious almost? Eerie? Not entirely sure, but it was..off. It has me hooked, that's what it is. I'm excited for the first chapter! Can't wait!

[Sylvana]

I'm actually excited for this, it sounds different and fun! You should totally message me with what you plan on doing because I don't think I can wait :P

[Lydia]

I can't wait to see where you take this. Oh, and I got Delirium today! I know you said it was really good, so I can't wait to start on it.

[Sophie]

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
READ IT
READ IT NOOOWWWWW

[Lydia]

I WILL! I REALLY WILL!

[Sophie]

yay!