Insignificant

was a haiku, but i added the last line

I feel like a tree

not ever lasting, nor tall

but sedentary.

And small.

Author's Note

reviews please!

Reviews

[Odayin]

The last line links the end with the beginning, smoothly written and you can definitely see there's something special about you from this one.
Great poem/haiku+1

[justthatgirl34]

Short and sweet. I love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sedentary. A very good word. A powerful poem. You said a lot in 14 words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lydia]

I love the last line. It almost makes it seem like an afterthought. Cool!