Cross My Heart

omg! what is this?!?!? Could it be... a..... POEM?!?!?!

Cross my heart and hope to die,

I have loved you for the last time.

No more will you torment my brain,

the thoughts falling like acid rain.

Cross my heart and hope to die,

oh how I'll miss those grey eyes.

But your pupils will not see my soul,

making me lose all sight of my goals.

Cross my heart and hope to die,

I remember when I thought you were mine.

But I found out the day before last,

that it was upon me, the spell was cast.

Cross my heart and hope to die,

my heart started to shrivel and cry.

But there you are with her,

and we haven't spoken a single word.

Cross my heart and hope to die,

that's what I'll do with this kitchen knife.

Author's Note

finally wrote a poem! Thank god, I've been needing to, but I didn't have any inspiration!
reviews please!

Reviews

[Odayin]

So direct. The shif at the end was abrupt. It's actually so out of place..that it fits absolutely perfectly. The change in rhythm, the change in life..well end in life anyway.
You had some grew lines in this one, the meanin basic being thrown at you and it was flowing like a stream. Nice one Sophie

[afra]

great! ...i love it

[Amanda]

Maroon 5 got that line stuck in my head....
Anyways, I like it

[Sophie]

That's wherei got it lol

[xEmix]

Its really good :) I like it especially how you repeat the first line. Good job Keep writing :D