Epilogue

A Chapter by Sophie

Epilogue

Louis

“Daddy, can I have some ice cream?” Jasmine asks, looking up at me with her color changing eyes, which are gold today. Her straight, light brown hair is slipping from it's ponytail, and her dress is spattered with mud.

“Didn't you just have a cookie?” I say, picking her up.

“No!” She says.

“Don't lie to me.” I say.

“Fine...” She says, “How 'bout for dessert?”

“I suppose, it is your fourth birthday.” I say setting her down. Ali walks over, Zach finally stopped crying after she burped him. We had two miscarriages, but we have children now. Jasmine came first, she was the first pregnancy and she was, obviously, successful. For Zach though, we found a woman willing to carry our baby, and she gave birth to him, but he's completely us, with Ali's curly hair, but my color, like Jasmine, and my eyes.

One Direction's fourth album is coming out soon, and Ali's first as well. She sings the kids lullabies every night. Ali's mum hasn't talked to her since the day Ali flipped out on her.

Sometimes she comes to me crying, worried she'll end up like her mother, but I know she won't. I'd never let her, either.

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© 2012 Sophie

Author's Note

the end! I'm kind of glad this is over, it was kind of sucky...
reviews please!

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Taylor Ann

It was kind of sucky? Did you seriously have the guts to type that?!
I LOVED THIS STORY SO SO SO MUCH! When I first started reading this, I wasn't big into One Direction. But after each chapter I would look up 'Louis Tomlinson facts' and 'Harry Styles Quotes', and 'One Direction Funny Moments', and now I am a total Directioner! I loved the emotions throughout the entire piece, and especially the dialogue! I loved how spot on all of your facts were! Like Louis liking of girls who eat carrots, and Harry's habit of being naked, and Louis' now liking of girls who like Lamborginis. Lol xD I loved it all so so much! Especially your research on British sayings and insults. Those just made the piece gold! The characters were my favorite part! Even though Harry kinda cheated on his best friend (which he would never do) I still love him so uber much!
Wow, I just got very distracted on the topic of One Direction. So I'll get back to the review.
Basically, I just loved everything about it. It truly captured all the emotions, and you played them out beautifully throughout the piece. Wonderful work, Sophie! You have blown me away, one again! Keep up the amazing work, and never give up writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Odayin

I really like the whole story as whole, just the emotions that flowed with it on it's happy trail to the expected. I like the conflict and all the problems they ran into as a whole. I thought the whole story was quite...overwhelming. Great job, you showed your ability to provide a great flow numerous times and it seemed like each event was destined to happen.
Oh and I love the name choices at the end, Jasmine is a great name.
Nice job Sophie...I can't believe I read the whole book...

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Sorry about that XD

Abbie

beautiful story sophie! I loved it. It was so real, that you could barely tell it was a fanfiction! The ending was wonderful, and now I'm gonna go and read you second fan fiction! :D