Brooklyn

one of my bestfriends! Written for a prompt where we chose osmeone we love's name and we could only use those letters. So. Hard. Brooklyn, you need a T in your name.

Babbling like a brook,

nose in a book,

no lies,

in grey eyes.

No bond beyond,

ally like none,

soars like rain,

Brooklyn.

Author's Note

also, brooklyn has blue eyes that CAN be grey, but there was no u in her name...

Reviews

[Eloha]

Pretty darn original! If I do say so myself.

[Lydia]

You are an absolutely phenomenal writer. I would never have been able to come up with that. Very stunning poem!

[Sophie]

thank you!

[Crifa]

Haha "nose in book" ohh Brooklyn...this describes her well

[Alex Vidmar]

Very nice.

[Maan]

Sweet. :)

[Brooklyn]

Awwwwwww...thanks bud :)

[Sophie]

no problemo chica ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice description. I like the flow of thoughts and the feel of friendship in the words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

Haha this is awesome! Interesting how you only used the letters in her name :)

[Owlgirl]

That's sweet :)

[Celestial Witch Child]

Love it.