I'm Alive

Help me...

I'm alive

I can still feel it all

Pulsing through my veins

Pounding against my heart

Ripping my soul

Shattering my mind

Breaking who I am.

Help me.

I'm alive.

I can't be.

This isn't how it should be

I should be under.

Forever.

But now....

I'm alive.

I'm fighting back.

I'm lashing out

At whoever tries to stop me

Because

I'm alive.

Reviews

[Silent Knight]

splended

[Black]

nice,
though use some whitel ines,
it makes it easier to read..
Use a white line when you change the topic, or change pase, or metafore or etc..

well you dont have to though, its nice like this as well...
good job