combined universesi

To be a part of your world; your universe. I would happily leave mine. Our energies will combine as we orbit; using time and nature to find the right time to align. 

Galaxies and unknown universes seek to find this balance within their solar systems. Their atmosphere through to the core of each planet suffer: Over exploited, under exposed. They welcome every explorer or mask barriers to intruders.

To be a part of your world, night will bear the same fruits of day, winter of summer, black of white, darkness of light. Dreams of the night will claim my reality of day. I wake up into a world i never went to sleep in. Awake is the sound of your voice, the melody of your song. Awake is the sleep i once sought refuge in when i no longer wanted to feel, when i needed energy i couldn’t thrive on alone, when your energy resided only in my dreams. Hosts of hosts, we recycle our pleasure and gain.

To be in your world, your energy is the giver of my life, your presence and support be the sustainance of it. Within your nature you remain central of all ongoings. Using cloud formations to protect me from the burns of your joy or scolds from your shedding of tears. My world without yours is a nonchalant universe of monochrome visuals experiencing periods of poverty and wealth, famine and harvests, beauty without justice.

Forever, developments will be made but evolutions will take no real form. Biology, physics and chemistry have no relevance in a land consisting of one organism, one force and one chemical atom.

Reviews

[c.m.]

Incredibly interesting, and very good. Never seen a poem in this format, but it worked. I loved the words, magical phrasing. Nice job.

[Stef Outsiders]

An interesting piece dear friend, if I am honest I may have to read it again to understand what this is about. But your choice of words is very moving, I sense space and energy, admiration in some form...
still it's an interesting piece!