broken pieces

Inspired by real life

For I'm weak, I look down upon this earth
I feel shattered, shattered dreams
What else can I leave for?
For all I dreamt of, hoped for is no more
My dreams shattered in my eyes,
All I can do is look back,
Look back to what was, before I was
Before I was this, that I don't like, and the world doesn't approve of.
All iam is this. with every leaving breath
I hope, I pray, that this shall pass..
Shattered dreams, nothing more than hope, hope of rebuilding these dreams,
Where can I start? what foundation do I lay? where do I start?
I look back to what it was, before it became...
Oooh! what became of me
What have I become? What is to become
Of me, where do I start rebuilding
Shattered dreams, lost hope, the road ahead seem unclear, what do I do?
What do I do now? Fear creeps in
Telling me I can't make it,
Reminding me of the past...
Oooh the past I so wish to forget
The past I so wish 2 bury, but how can I?
For it is within me, a part of me and in me
I look back to how it was before it was, I can see the little girl full of hope, as I reach out to pull her hand, I look up, and the voice says: "behold I'm the Lord your God, I will be with you, till the ends of time"
And the my hope is restored I'm renewed! I have hope, because I knw he will be with me, I shall fear not.

Author's Note

Excuse the format if it seems poor or any spelling errors

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

l enjoyed this remarkable poem and the emotions displayed but you could edit this cause their are a few errors if you would like l can point them out but l like your poem.

[lulesky]

Hello Stowe thank you for your review, I would really appreciate it if u pointed the erros out, I'm not an expirienced writter