Well...
I'd love to give you the politically correct and socially acceptable response and say that it is God's will, The Lord tests us from time to time, but that would be a load of BS.
I really adore your little poem Luis, it stirs the heart and makes us ask why, but there is no simple answer.
Let us ask instead, what can we do?
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Thank You for your powerful and insightful words, they always challenge me
to look deeper in.. read moreThank You for your powerful and insightful words, they always challenge me
to look deeper into my work and into my heart. Your words inspire me not just
to be a better writer, but also a better man... And you're right, instead of focusing
on the why, we should be focusing on the what. What can we do to help those
who are hurting?
10 Years Ago
Luis, I think you have a big heart and I think you do your part just by making us think. :)
Definitely not a fairy tale....I love how this one is in your face, wake up and smell the coffee kind of thing that gets the blood boiling and puts the nerves in knots....if you give two shytes that is...no answers here....affecting poetry, powerful stuff Luis.
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10 Years Ago
Your heart and your writing inspire so many and changes lives. I know this
to be true... becau.. read moreYour heart and your writing inspire so many and changes lives. I know this
to be true... because its help change mine. You are truly a great writer and
an inspiration.
10 Years Ago
You're too kind Luis, you've put a gentle smile on my heart....it's always a pleasure to read your w.. read moreYou're too kind Luis, you've put a gentle smile on my heart....it's always a pleasure to read your words....
If only more people took the time to look, to care, to speak out, to speak up, to lend a hand, to extend their heart, there would be less suffering.. But it is easier to turn a blind eye, to continue on your normal everyday, selfish lives, ignoring the pain and struggles of others than it is to CARE.. I love that you seek answers to this question... I may not know the answer, and refuse to believe that it is God's will that people must suffer, I do know this, however: I do what I can with what I have to help those I can.. I don't go around with blinders on to the pain of others, and I open my heart to those in need.. Very beautiful write which shows us the depths of emotion and light contained in your diverse soul.. the tone, the emotion, the flow, the construction, and the word choice are exquisite as usual.. well done..
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10 Years Ago
There are no words that I can say that would adequately describe how I
feel about how your wor.. read moreThere are no words that I can say that would adequately describe how I
feel about how your words inspire me... So I will just say Thanks.
No, it is definitely not like the fairy tale.
This is so thought-provoking and tragically beautiful with the rhyming, it makes sure to hammer itself in my mind.
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10 Years Ago
Beautiful words from a beautiful soul, Thank You, it is an honor to be read and
reviewed by a .. read moreBeautiful words from a beautiful soul, Thank You, it is an honor to be read and
reviewed by a such a gifted writer such as yourself.
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Oh you're welcome, it's such an honor to be able to read your amazing writing!
Great poem, very thought provoking! I tend to think it's that people are completely lacking in compassion for each other. It's a sad fact that we can often be apathetic to another's suffering. Nicely written!
Well...
I'd love to give you the politically correct and socially acceptable response and say that it is God's will, The Lord tests us from time to time, but that would be a load of BS.
I really adore your little poem Luis, it stirs the heart and makes us ask why, but there is no simple answer.
Let us ask instead, what can we do?
This comment has been deleted by this poetry author.
10 Years Ago
Thank You for your powerful and insightful words, they always challenge me
to look deeper in.. read moreThank You for your powerful and insightful words, they always challenge me
to look deeper into my work and into my heart. Your words inspire me not just
to be a better writer, but also a better man... And you're right, instead of focusing
on the why, we should be focusing on the what. What can we do to help those
who are hurting?
10 Years Ago
Luis, I think you have a big heart and I think you do your part just by making us think. :)
My name is Luis Santos Verges and I have a passion
for graphic design and writing. It is my belief,
that poems are inner reflections, "Soul Tattoos"
that are meant to live forever.
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