What a heartfelt, moving, lovely tribute to the one who has captured your heart, lifted your soul, and completed your world.. In the midst of the darkness, the despair, the cold empty loneliness, the bright light of a healing spirit can feel like such salvation.. It can remind us what it feels like to live again.. To breathe fully, to FEEL deeply, to want to wake up every morning just to see their smile, get lost in the comfort of their embrace, and to experience what life can truly be like with someone we love by our side.. IT can make those broken pieces feel like they fit again, like we are once again whole and have purpose... Sometimes it does happen like a "thief in the night" when we least expect it from somewhere we never thought to look... This is truly one of life's surprises that shouldn't be questioned--just cherished like the blessing it is... You have captured this beautifully here.. It flowed like the whispers of angels into the heart and lets it fly away on the wings of love... very nicely done sir... :)
Thank You for your words and Thank you for taking the time to share them...
and yes, love doe.. read moreThank You for your words and Thank you for taking the time to share them...
and yes, love does bring great and wonderful changes.
This is incredible!! I love that the rhyming is subtle and you didn't have to dig for obscure words to make it work. And overall the piece is beautiful and depicts a feeling very well.
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Thank you very much for such heartfelt sentiment and the
beautiful review... It touches my he.. read moreThank you very much for such heartfelt sentiment and the
beautiful review... It touches my heart deeply. Thank You
I love how it flows so easy and the deeper meaning of finally feeling like you've found where you belong because you finally found that special person. A lovely piece you have wrote here. Enjoyed the read very much. I don't normally do many read requests though unless something like this catches my eye. :) thank you for sharing.
-Yours Truly
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I know you said you don't normally do many read request so it makes it
all the more special to.. read moreI know you said you don't normally do many read request so it makes it
all the more special to me that you answered mine. Thank You for taking
the time to read my piece. It especially blesses my heart to know that
you enjoyed it.
Thanks...
Beautifully written.. very intimate depiction of love. It speaks volumes about your character. Your rhyming is on point and you kept it short and sweet. I liked this piece. Nice job.
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Thank You for your kind words and for taking the time to read my work. Your words
are both a b.. read moreThank You for your kind words and for taking the time to read my work. Your words
are both a blessing and an inspiration.
This is beautiful and pure. This honest feelings in this poem make me smile. I love your rhyming techniques! It flows like water!
A wonderful write!
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Thank you for your beautiful sentiments. If my writing can bring a beautiful smile
to someone'.. read moreThank you for your beautiful sentiments. If my writing can bring a beautiful smile
to someone's face...Then I have done my job.
Thank You
Thank You, for all of you who have taken the time to review my work, and
share your hearts with me. I am both blessed and honored that you have chosen
to let me share my deepest innermost thoughts with you.
Thank You
My name is Luis Santos Verges and I have a passion
for graphic design and writing. It is my belief,
that poems are inner reflections, "Soul Tattoos"
that are meant to live forever.
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