burning bright

I will hold you tight

Can't ever get through

I will love you now

and forever more

 

burning deep inside

a passion burning bright

a flame so hot

we said it at midnight

and my love is forever more

we wil dance into ther rain

and say it again.

Reviews

[Sexy P3nguin]

This poem is very well written. I love the way you defined love as flame that burns inside of us all. Have saying that lets get into the details. I loved the story put behind it and I really liked this part
"burning deep inside
a passion burning bright
a flame so hot
we said it at midnight"

Amazing way of putting. Great read

[Aradie Rain]

Beautiful