2 years goin 2000 miles

I couldnt get her off my mind again.... I got an idea for a poem... Hope yall like it.

I want to go the 2000 miles

I want to be the guy that turns it all around

I want to hold your hand

I want to be the guy that holds you

I want to be the guy that kisses your lips and makes it mean something

These feelings inside become stronger every moment we speak

I love your smile

I love your laugh

I love your crimson red hair

I want to make you mine

I would travel the world with you pennyless

and run with you forever

For some reason I know this is right

I know how young we are

and that we haven't actually seen each other for two years

but my bones say she is the one to be with

they say do the 2000 miles and win her heart

I will give you the moon

I will give you the Stars

I would right your name within them

Let me do the 2000 miles

you wont ever regret it

I'll le me ask you a what if...

"what if we fall in love, in true love... before I make the 2000 miles?"

it wouldnt be physical it would be tottaly emotional...

I want you to be my girl...

Author's Note

I wish i could explain myself better...

Reviews

[Water_the_Sun]

you do a great job of expressing the feeling:)

And keep up that hope, keep this feeling alive, because its always possible, i know from experience:)

Youre a great little poet:) Please post more soon:P:)

[Rath]

i dont know if its finished though