A Fine Line

A Fine Line

A Poem by Lucy

It's a fine line
Rain pours
Couples dance

It's a fine line
Going nowhere
Going fast

It's a fine line
Living life
Dying slowly

Life and death
It's a fine line
No one knows

Oh it's there
Unspoken
Unheard of

© 2011 Lucy


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I read this poem twice because I felt I didn't do justice by just one read. I am forced to think by this very well though out piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago
this poem is very well penned, it's balanced neat and clear, I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on June 15, 2011
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Lucy
Lucy

Milton, NH



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Hi I'm Lucy. I'm 17 years old. I love to write. I mainly right poetry. Sometimes my poetry doesn't sound like the typical poet's. My poetry is based off of my life and my emotions. Not just random thi.. more..

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