A Fine Line

It's a fine line

Rain pours

Couples dance

It's a fine line

Going nowhere

Going fast

It's a fine line

Living life

Dying slowly

Life and death

It's a fine line

No one knows

Oh it's there

Unspoken

Unheard of

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

I read this poem twice because I felt I didn't do justice by just one read. I am forced to think by this very well though out piece.

[Cherrie Palmer]

this poem is very well penned, it's balanced neat and clear, I enjoyed reading it.