a disney kind of love

2011

who we were then

the past, dead and gone

we grow

we live, we love and we fall

deep down the rabbit hole

you are my wonderland

second star to the right

straight on till morning

you're my dream come true

this love is special

pure and genuine

no judgments made

we are who we are

from black and white

to technicolor

you've made me see the light

sitting in a cemetery christmas eve

you are my pumpkin king

i am your queen

i've got no strings to hold me down

you cut them all

you set me free

you loved me at once 

love at first sight

my prince charming 

the glass slipper fits

there is no mistake

this is real

dreams are wishes your heart makes

my heart and dreams saw you

i won't say i'm in love 

i won't deny it either

tale as old as time

our tale is a thing of legends

hold me tight

don't let go

looking up at the stars

i know someone's thinking of me

every day i fall more in love 

you are my disney world

Reviews

[Joseph D. Smith]

This is an awesome poem! Part of it was somewhat free-verse, but there's nothing wrong with that if you intended for it to be. Also, it is kind of all-over the place, but it doesn't take away from the experience, so it's just a minor issue.

I want to just say you are an awesome poet. Great job!