A wish

A day must be unmasked once again

A new beginning will get close

Friends will be discovered like golden treasure

Happiness will be found everywhere

And tears will come out of joy.

Author's Note

july 23 2011 wrote it :)

Reviews

[Chris]

"Truisms". Sometimes you need to match reality to what others say... and sometimes not.

Chris

[Dreamer]

The increasing size of the font leaves the impression that your hope in life is growing bigger and stronger:) Nice job

[Daytonight]

Beautifully done. I love the form and the colors you chose for your font! Keep on penning.

[Just Cat]

Aww this is sweet. And I like the build up and then *BAM!* big statement at the end.
Nicely done :)

[DearSweetAgony]

This poem is really cute and quite unique.
I like this poem for the same reason Raven Starhawk liked it.
Very cool write, I really liked it.

[Raven Starhawk]

I like how every sentence gets bigger. It is like a build up right before a huge climax. Well penned.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Short, sweet, and thats all it needed. colorful and enjoyable read. thanks for writing and sharing your work.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Like this. The color gives it the necessary intensity so it can be remembered correctly at that time when it is.

Cool work, kid.

[Raindrop]

Really puts a smile on my face. Positively wonderful! :D