Ahora soy yo

i am trying to write poem in my native language :p

Te pide que me miraras por ultima vez

No crei, que me ibas a ignorar

Mas dias pasan y yo sigue esperando tu carino otra vez.

 

Ahora soy yo

La que va a regresar te va hacer tragar mis lamentos.

Ahora no me importas tu,

 porque ahora soy una persona diferente

 

En mis suenos tu estabas a mi lado,

 y yo te miraba todo el tiempo.

Siempre me importaste aunque nunca valoraste

 Mi amor

Siempre me preocupaba

Te di todo mi ser

Y si algunas veces me olvide de ti,

Fue por ver si tu me querias como yo te queria a ti.

 

Entonces ahora soy yo, perdon si cambie

Pero ya no podia mas este dolor.

Perdon y yo  ya te dije adios.

 

 

Author's Note

i asked you to look at me
one more time
i did not think you will ignore me
more days passed
and i wait for your care again

now its me
who is going to come back and make you swallow all my regrets
now i dont care about you
because now im a different person

in my dreams you were alway next to me
and i looked at you all the time
i always cared about you even if you never value it
my love
i always worried
i gave you my all
and if some times i forgot about you
was because i wanted to see if you love me like i loved you

then now its me '
sorry if i changed i couldnt hold back more pain
sorry and i already said to you goodby

lol translation :)

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

very emotional and to the point...good write.

[marleywhite]

ew yo odio espanol!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Me encanta!!!! I wish I knew Spanish, but going by the translation as well, it reads so well, the hurt and pain and the moving on. Beautiful poem :)