Ashamed!

you know what shames me?

 

when someone wins

others are jealous

their envy doesnt end until they beat you

why be mean?

we are the same arent we?

 

why cant we play and not fight

sometimes i want to scream

" stop fighting"

why cant we be at peace?!

 

of course, how can you not be ashamed of what you say?

ill just slam the door if i ever see hypocrites going near me

why does hate need to exist?

 

Author's Note

somwthing i realized ....

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Brenda welcome into the dirty ways of the world!!! Some people just can't stand to see someone else happy or successful. And the sad thing is that it exists everywhere in some fashion!!!

You have captured it wondefully with your poem and its structure with its big font adds so much value to it :)

[SamBug]

Very great perspective. I totally understand and realize this as well. Great job!

[Christina May Shanaberg]

why does hate need to
exist?

Honey, if you could answer that one tiny question and make people understand, this would be paradise! We are supposed to be civilized; I have "never" heard a report of a homo sapien being as civilized, as even the least of the rest of earth's creatures. What is wrong with us, anyway?! Gosh, do you know why men wear ties; I bet they don't even know. In France they had a war, centuries back during battle (cheap uniforms,) and they couldn't tell each other apart; so, men wore a certain colored tie (cravat) to tell their pals not to shoot them. Oh, my goodness!! If I didn't like ties, before, I really hate them, now. After the war, you know how they love fashion, it became all the rage and turned into what is choking our men to death. Throw those babies off boys; tell them that you are lovers and not fighters! Great write; I have been doing too much research, lately!!