my perfect man:)

guitar strumming

sitting in a bar stool

what a wonderful melody played

my voice fit right with him

what a dream he will be

if he will only exist

 

all this time

sitting in a class room

a guy with a tie charmed me

now, he is past to me

i prefer my guitar guy

my perfect man

Author's Note

inspired by seeing my 23 yeard old cousin sing and play and thts when i relaize i prefer a guy with a guitar than a tie so bye bye troy you are no longer in my heart . now i know how my perfect guy will be like ;0

Reviews

[nevermindfan1991]

I really liked this poem, very creative and interesting. Wouldn't we all prefer a guy with a guitar than a tie. I liked your imagery, and the poem is written so simply, but means a lot more than it seems to. I loved reading this, I imagine this could be read at coffee shop poetry contest or something like that. Well, anyway really liked this poem!

[It Broke Me]

Since im a guy I cant really relate to the subject matter but from a writing stand point alone I dig it. It flows very well and it was very descriptive. I could almost see him up there on the stool with his guitar. =)

[Daniel88Batson]

I've got to mirror the opinion of a dude with a guitar. although I'd prefer her to be a chick =D
Or even better... Hayley Williams...... dream....

[Stephanie Slayer]

Absolutely wonderful

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I love a guy that plays music myself, sweet Brenda!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful poem, love how it reads so well, the imagery shoots out as I read. Great write :)

Very nice. I can relate to this poem as I too have my perfect man who doesn't exist. :)

[Raven Starhawk]

We all have our image of a perfect man. I liked this though. It was simple and flowed well.

[Becky C Strukamp]

what a wonderful memory. Very nice poem.