Annoying Pests!

Annoying Pests!

A Chapter by brenda

Sigh, oh gosh, I have to clean my room!!! Again… my mom screams from the kitchen “Honey, get the laundry!!! Come on Mary! Your uncles are coming!!”

“But mom you just told me like two seconds ago to clean my room!!” always telling me to do this and that and it is uuurgh!! Sometimes she becomes the ugly stepmother! (Even though she is my mom and my parents are happily married and sadly I am not Cinderella)

” ok, fine, clean your room Mary but you know laundry comes next!”  “I will mom got it…” what I hated about “parties” it is that my mom gets all crazed up over nothing and then I wish earth can swallow me or something!

******* two hours later*****

“Here comes, the evil association!”

A welcoming thought to my two little cousins

“The evil pest and the eviler doctor! Drum roll please!”

They sneer at me, I timidly lead them into my room, open the door for them (my room becomes the day care for them…)

Like two monkeys they hang on to the computer (my cousin is the evil one and I can not help to say but he looks like a monkey)

Then I go outside to m big backyard and talk to my family members. I get bored sanded by my worried aunt, I go to check on them and I was amazed just by walking into my room…

My pillows on the floor! my sheet on the floor and my ruler broken on the floor. The only thing saved was my teddy bear. I think!

“ AAAAh , evil monsters, clean my room immediately !!”

My monkey cousin looks at me, goes to the floor, picks everything up and slams it on top of my bed. Nine and still can act like a four year old, my bed what’s left of it looks, because of him like a flat surface with a pile of dirty clothes. I give him the evil look, my other cousin he is 11 years old looks at me and silently gestures my monkey cousin to do it right. His reward was ice-cream with hot fudge.

I most of my life have lived alone, well no siblings, its great! But the silence is unbearable all I have is my phone to text…

I hear giggles coming from my roomwhat are these evil monsters up to? Quietly tiptoeing against the floorboard leaning my ear to my door and hearing this…

“Hello, hello, hello troy, hello, hello, hello this is Mary, hello yeah you know “

“GET YOUR HANDS OFF MY PHONE!!”

The phone drops out of their hands just softly to  ...” who are you?! This is not Mary! Hello!he-hellooo…”

*click*

“What do you think you two were doing” I sit down at the edge of my bed look at them both

“Nothiiing!” a chorus of sweet lies!

“Grrr! Just get out! And watch Icarly or something in the living room!! Goo!”

My little cousin’s fake tears sprang out of his eyes while my monkey cousin stares at me accusingly

“I am going to tell my mom, and your dad” the tears magically dissapear

Raising my eyebrow” go ahead, I don’t care!”

Both start crying. I swear boys are annoying, they not only know how to cry, they know at an early age how to lie. I tell you it’s in their blood!

 I Go to look for troy’s name in my phone text him saying” hey troy, um I’m sorry about that, my little cousins grabbed my phone

His sweet reply wasdon’t worry about it, it’s alright :)

Stupid smiley face, I felt like calling him saying… did you know that your stupid smiley faces make me go in the clouds?!!

But no, I did not do that, not only because when I text him, it feels like this big enchanting world of happiness and gentle manners because.. he was the only thing that I felt safe with…

 



© 2011 brenda


Author's Note

brenda
basically introduces her dreams and her life and her crush... what do you think?:)

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Mary is definitely a girl full of personality. Love the way you illustrated the text messages. Very creative and interesting. Brings life to the page.

My only tip would be that you limit the amount of exclamation points to 2 or 3 to a page. That way when you do happen to use one, it feels more significant to the reader.

Great job here!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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did you know that your stupid smiley faces make me go in the clouds?!!
YEAH I WISH HE KNEW THAT TOO. Too bad we don't speak anymore so I'll never see them again. And I never want to see his face again. But I like this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loving it so far, rings so true to me! The relatives arriving, parents behaving crazy all stressed about it! And of course the crushes we have:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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boredom city:p!!!, FL



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