Pitiful case!

pity is the last thing i ever want from a person

"oh look at her"

it makes me mad,  even in writing

pitiful case

how many people here on WC

have to figure out why arent they good enough?

yet they still try

you can always enjoy writing, that is awesomely amazing

but what about the other writing?

you see, every person is a differnt world

you just have to explore it.

they have their own side, their own face

on how to face troubles.

read awesomeness, but also read the ones

who maybe you being an expert can help him improve his writing

because no body is born with talent to write

they have talent but they havent found it yet

so please dont be pitiful and review people to let them know

what is wrong or what you did not like.

critics are accepted, they may hurt you but

life is meant to learn from mistakes

give this unique writers a chance!! 

Author's Note

ok so there is so many people here that never sometimes are reviewed just asking that

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I believe we have to find poets and writers that we enjoy reading and read their work but we should also explore the new writers and take a look at others. When I am off of work and have time, I return a review to those who read my ramblings but I also try to look at some new writers and poets and authors I have not read before. I am not a educated in critiquing the work of others and frankly I don't know squat about poetry, I just write. What I do in in a review is try to tell how the writing made me feel and what I think it is about. That is the best I can do..Now.......if I come across writing that contains numerous misspelled words and appears as if the writer just threw it out there and didn't care, I am not going to bother.........my take on this one. :) Well written Brenda

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Well said!

You know what they say? Don't you people?

Different strokes for different folks!

Bear that in mind

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol...
its a poetic warning.
Good way to speak your mind

[WaterColorPanda]

go ahead and read something I've written, and tell me what you think. if after that you think I'm good enough, then let me know and I'd be happy to read what ever it is you want me to, and I'll tell you exactly what I love and hate about it with complete honesty.

[WaterColorPanda]

truth is it hurts when someone says they don't like something you've written. Even if you say "criticism accepted" you know it still hurts when someone points out your faults. when you thought it was perfect, or at least nearly so. It's hard to do that, to someone you don't know. I try to be honest with people (you misspelled writers in the last line!!!!!) but I think especially for new writers, encouragement is really what they need, until they can develop the passion for writing.