heart made of icecream

deep in your heart

i know there is sweetness

the most painful way to get it out is

through coldness

you appear so magnificent

in your appeareance

tricking everyone into your foolishness

coming in different

flavors

even friendly

like for people who can not taste you

but i have tasted you both ways

because i scoop a piece of you in me

sweet or not sweet

either way accepted

you but you just served to fatten me up

with your lies

and tricks that

you made to everyone

final word

you have a heart made of icecream.

Author's Note

ok right now i need reviews if you think its good cause im about to put it in facebook and the guy who this poem is for will probably see it should i or should i not? help!!

Reviews

[Cody McGeary]

This is really good. I like the metaphor. I like it a lot.

[Amber Tasch]

Hey this is pretty good! If you read the story (the Land of Candy) it really goes to a story!