fatness

fatness

A Poem by brenda
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many people feel this feeling a lot of times

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it stares at you when you look at yourself

it laughs at you when you want to wear this outfit

but just like it was easily gained

 it could be easily lost with strength and perseverance

because either you  are happy with it or your not.

 fact is just accept who you are and what you are and you will live a happy life:)

© 2011 brenda


Author's Note

brenda
i used some cliches in writing this 0.0

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Oh so very true. Could be better construtcted, but the concept is there.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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brenda
brenda

boredom city:p!!!, FL



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