lost

lost

A Poem by brenda

lost i am not knowing when to turn when i need to make a choice.

 

not knowing what to do when something not predicted happens.

 

and not only me but i have lost my heart too

 

through the thick trees in a wide and large forest you can find my heart.

 

find it and give it back to me but with one condition please dont break it.  

© 2011 brenda


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We are so willing to trust people with the most amazing gifted to us by God, our hearts. We feel for one moment in our life the true and pure feeling of belonging to someone and we feel wonderful. But before we know it the other person is returning our heart back to us... Broken. I loved your writing. It opened many doors of my heart and took me someplace else.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is a great write, keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel you in this, I also feel the spirit of youth in your heart at work, and at play.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a lovely plea

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 2, 2011
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brenda
brenda

boredom city:p!!!, FL



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