lost

lost i am not knowing when to turn when i need to make a choice.

 

not knowing what to do when something not predicted happens.

 

and not only me but i have lost my heart too

 

through the thick trees in a wide and large forest you can find my heart.

 

find it and give it back to me but with one condition please dont break it.  

Reviews

[Faraway Sado]

We are so willing to trust people with the most amazing gifted to us by God, our hearts. We feel for one moment in our life the true and pure feeling of belonging to someone and we feel wonderful. But before we know it the other person is returning our heart back to us... Broken. I loved your writing. It opened many doors of my heart and took me someplace else.

[empty]

i loved this one, i know the feelings

[StarSandwich]

Loved It.
Seriously, the words flowed. The last line x3 Loved It!

[ब्र&#..]

this was a great read, nice job...well written
alltid
-Meja

[Kyla H]

Hmm, your writers note clears everything up, but I had some trouble completely understanding the meaning of this..Anyway, still well done.

[quinfinn]

i'll be sure to handle it with extreme care should i find it, and carry it gently and lovingly back to its owner. what an adorable effort this is! so young are you, and already struggling with choices which should not yet concern you to the extent this beautiful poem reaches. very pretty and clever!

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

im a lil confused, by this one... just to be honest

[quinfinn]

nicely worded. i love a good love poem and this one certainly qualifies. i felt your
emotions from this and that's what makes it work for me. excellent job!

[Kyle]

This is short, yet full of emotion and to the point! I like the last few words especially. Very nice.

[Cynthia]

Its sad when we lost, but when we can stand up again, everything will change, cause we're going to find they way again. I like your first line, it states out what is lost, a very clear opening, telling the readers an introduction like sentence is great, cause it kinda introduce your poem to us as well. I love the last two lines as well, it has a sad tone, but I love it :)
Nice written!