lost

lost i am not knowing when to turn when i need to make a choice.

 

not knowing what to do when something not predicted happens.

 

and not only me but i have lost my heart too

 

through the thick trees in a wide and large forest you can find my heart.

 

find it and give it back to me but with one condition please dont break it.  

Reviews

[Faraway Sado]

We are so willing to trust people with the most amazing gifted to us by God, our hearts. We feel for one moment in our life the true and pure feeling of belonging to someone and we feel wonderful. But before we know it the other person is returning our heart back to us... Broken. I loved your writing. It opened many doors of my heart and took me someplace else.

[nevermindfan1991]

You are able to express so much, with so little words. This poem was well written and was able to convey its message beautifully. Great job!

[Jake Staffeld]

We all want our hearts back whole, but a lot of the time we don't.

[ImagineItAll]

For some reason, I liked this style. I loved the topic, but I had difficultly reading the sentences. But I think that only added to the charm of the poem called "Lost" :-)

Great job expressing your feelings.

[Chris]

I only wish the same every night.

I love the punchlines (last 2 lines)

[Joiedevivre]

very good. Lost thyself need someone to redirect you to your heart. i' often wished for this myself.

[TheFemininePad]

I really like this poem a lot. It shows how love can lead us to become lost. Feeling like we are stumbling through life, and finally when we do find love we don't want our hearts broken. It can be very hard on someone. As I have always said love is the most powerful emotion of all. Great job on your poem.

[Searching 4 Serenity]

It is easy to break ones heart, even when it's unintentionally. A lot said with only few words

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

oh, this is so beautiful.

[Erinne S.]

I really liked this! All too often we give our hearts too easily and most times get it broken... the feeling of insecurity and being lost in ourselves sinks in. Many people can relate to what you have written! Thank you for sharing :)

~Erinne