The Actress

The Actress

A Poem by luciddreamer
"

WOTD....Effuse

"

Her fake effuse smile

An act she bravely plays now

will someday be her

© 2010 luciddreamer


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I do so hate fake...
The truth, perfectly wrapped up in a few words...simply brilliant!

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh I like that wrap up line~ takes it elsewhere than expected~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very clever!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

those fake smiles always rake sadness in the end.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

someday

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 18, 2010
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luciddreamer
luciddreamer

Carrollton, GA



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