Eternal Peace

Eternal Peace

A Poem by luciddreamer
"

Senyu using WOTD word "halcyon"

"
The halcyon queen
once a dream all men wanted
raised her wings to fly

© 2010 luciddreamer


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short with a good message. love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the last line.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Creates a very vivid picture, I like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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at last! =)~ this speaks to me of freedom and hope!
applause!~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oohh.. beautiful

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 Added on November 10, 2010
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