On the Square

On the Square

A Poem by luciddreamer

On the square

In Marietta

Many days ago

I use to chase

the pigeons

to and fro

for my father

said they would be mine

if I could only salt their tail

many days this was my

only goal

© 2010 luciddreamer


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out of a child's dream, "for my father said they would be mine"
fingers grasping into the air..........were you able to make them yours?

Posted 14 Years Ago


touching poetic photograph in vivid emotional detail~ how truly deep the touch of our parent's lives touch our own~

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 27, 2010
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luciddreamer
luciddreamer

Carrollton, GA



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