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A Poem by luciddreamer

Ending her long apologizing phage

She shrugs the guilt off her page

As her ears leaned toward the sage...who

loosened the bars of this cage

gently pulling in the rage

pushing the appropriate guage

surprised she made it to this age

yearning to be only watching the stage

 

 

© 2010 luciddreamer


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Hello Luciddreamer,

A wonderful piece, but I feel a little self doubt, I do hope you pull in the ugly beast that it is. Another fabulous write my friend.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 17, 2010
Last Updated on October 19, 2010

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luciddreamer
luciddreamer

Carrollton, GA



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