A Dream

A Dream

A Poem by luciddreamer
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the honeysuckle lane was from my babysitters back yard..she was an old woman who use to scare the hell out of us with her scarry stories..this is the dream I had

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I'm walking down the honeysuckle lane of my youth,

                  

absorbing the smells, remembering the sights, searching for truth

                 

gazing over the water, my dear departed sister I see

               

becomming ecstatic, forgetting I'm an old woman I start to run

 

As I see her running beside me across the creek

 

Just then I realize she's maybe nine or ten

 

Excitement overtakes me for I know once I get across I will be a child again

 

My soul so wants to play the clapping games of yesterday,

 

I see a glimpse of the bridge ahead, then............

 

damn, now I'm awake

 

 

 

© 2010 luciddreamer


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Lovely, the power of dreams is immense. Its lovely that you went back in time for this one as I often find dreams normally look to the future which is disappointing when the past is worth reliving in sleep. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Some dreams bring such joy.........I dream of my children alot as babies that I can still carry.........and always feel so sad when I wake up, you captured this really well with your words.........

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think we all long for the simple days of our childhood and try to find them by creating new memories of our past! Well written!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. oh, that's amazing ... i marvel at those who can interpret dreams ... it's a skill i yearn to have ... because this is so profound ... the sheer time travel ... it must be a message from your subconscious mind ... maybe to just revisit your childhood ... and some of the best moments ... :) ...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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