My friends

My friends

A Poem by luciddreamer

I have had so many friends along the way

The shadow..though frightening at first,  can help you find what you need

The paranoia...full of fear seeing destruction everywhere, how else can you tear down to replace

The love....ah, the one that I am always seeking, the one so many times I thought I had..but then lost, usually bringing

The anger...the monster I have ran from, the hardest for me to see

© 2010 luciddreamer


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. you express yourself so amazingly precisely ... i think that monster within ... you speak of ... is very poetic and not at all damaging ... you know and have seen so much ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hello Luciddreamer,

I have struggled for a long time with the Monster within. I was always afraid I would lose control and release the monster on someone I loved.....or thought I loved. I don't know if it was time, adaption, or maturity but I started to leash the beast within. I tamed it.. although at times even a dog has to bite randomly.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 14 Years Ago


lol...thank you Yin, or would you prefer Vicky?

Posted 14 Years Ago


this was pure and honest. Oh by the way, it is frightening not frightning. good job

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 8, 2010
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