Senseless

Senseless

A Poem by luciddreamer
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Thank you Yin for the name :) Peace Robin

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I have always had an inner voice helping me to survive,

That is why I have ran.

I use to attract horrors,

That is why I turned off my magnet.

I have always had a hard time accepting reality,

Because it isn't.

I pray I never find what I'm looking for,

For I've seen it.

© 2010 luciddreamer


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this is simple but reading it makes real sense - there's an understanding of self here and a acceptance, some outstanding lines. (dont quote). the second half for me speaks volumes ..so exceptional clever and thought provoking

Posted 14 Years Ago


sometimes we write things that never make sense to ourselves but it might make sense to others. I like this piece, and I like the irony in the last two lines, praying to not get what one looks for because they've seen it, is quite a play of words. I agree to the lines "I have always had a hard time accepting reality, Because it isn't".
Good job for something that doesn't make sense, maybe it should me named senseless... lol just a suggestions.
Good writings to you!
-Yin

Posted 14 Years Ago



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