Releasing Fears

heavenly sleep out of reach

mind is playing out loud

 

thoughts of yesterday

 

pleasures of now

 

hopes of tomorrow

 

twisting,  bending, performing

a bittersweet play

on a well worn stage

 

waiting for the Gods applause

 

 

 

Reviews

[Liza]

this is pretty insightful
i enjoyed this short but deep literary ride!

[Matthew Kult]

Hello again,

A bittersweet poem on a well worn screen waiting for My applause.

Bravo. Excellent write. Better read.

Regards,

Matthew

[Tina Kline]

This describes exactly what goes on in my mind, always thinking, always thinking, always thinking. And those thoughts are always what you mention in your writing. I think this is outstanding.

[Tony]

The mentality portrayed here is exactly the kind of illusion that I am constantly referring to, Robin.
Well said!

[deeps]

Very well written and ever so amazing!
I enjoyed this read!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

thoughtful diving deep to the rivers of endless searchings~

[Reza Farahmand]

wow, you amazed me, i like it so very much. i like the whole, but the last line
waiting for the God's applause
is the best.
and the flaw: we say God's applause i think.