Pieces of Me

He wears the best clothing,  won't give you a second glance,  he is pride

She wears her black lace dress, covering her face and ears, she is fear

All in white she dances, believing in tomorrows, she is hope

He wears his overalls, doing the work others find absurd, he is determination

She walks through translucent, pleasures are hers to seek,  she is love

 

And whether in the past or the future, they all are pieces of me

 

 

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Again,

Very personal and open. Takes strength to allow others the innersight into our own souls. Course when they look in they judge us, or our deeds. I have come to terms with such words like psychopath.....killer.

Not that any of what I just said has anything to do with anything else. Usually when I talk not many people listen anyway. I think that is a horrible thing. What isn't horrible is this write. Infact it is far from horrible, it is excellent.

Always,

Matthew

[Charlie]

this was a beautiful piece. well written. thank you for sharing. =)

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

wow. i love the imagery in this poem.

[Jess.]

I like this a lot, very creative, with a powerful message.