A Tragedy

A Tragedy

A Poem by luciddreamer

Blood stains on the floor

Alcohol, drugs, a hand gun

A mothers son dead

© 2010 luciddreamer


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So much said in so few words. Nice one.

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woaaaaah ! holy large story in 14 words. love it.

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devastating~ like a shot fired~ your poem quickly and painfully delivered~deeply affecting~

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Wow! straight and to the bitter point!
Heart wrenching write.

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Added on August 26, 2010
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Carrollton, GA



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