As I dream

Aching for his love, even eleven years later.

As I dreamed

I felt your touch

as well as your heart

beating like you are alive

but you are not

and I cry

myself  back to sleep

to dream

Reviews

[emily joe]

I like this a lot. It makes me think of my friend that died last year. The pain will never leave your heart, but neither will the memories, and the love.

[Branches]

Accurately said in only 8 lines. Nicely done.

[Talkativeted]

All that feeling in such a short poem. nice.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a malleable poetic pearl~ a delicate sigh~beautiful . . . .