As I dream

As I dream

A Poem by luciddreamer
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Aching for his love, even eleven years later.

"

As I dreamed

I felt your touch

as well as your heart

beating like you are alive

but you are not

and I cry

myself  back to sleep

to dream

© 2010 luciddreamer


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I like this a lot. It makes me think of my friend that died last year. The pain will never leave your heart, but neither will the memories, and the love.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Accurately said in only 8 lines. Nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


All that feeling in such a short poem. nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


a malleable poetic pearl~ a delicate sigh~beautiful . . . .

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 24, 2010
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luciddreamer
luciddreamer

Carrollton, GA



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