The Boys

The Boys

A Poem by luciddreamer
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A Boy
Anger building up in his soul
Remembrance of the family that was once his
Flashbacks of the bomb that took them away
Fear of never feeling at peace again
Weary of those who do not understand
Looking for answers wherever he can
Strapping the belt around his waist
Exploding in a nearby restaurant


As Another Boy

Feels anger building up in his soul
Remembering the family he once had
Having flashbacks about the bomb that took them away
Knowing he will never feel peace again
Becoming increasingly wary of those who do not understand
Looking for answers wherever he can

© 2010 luciddreamer


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it's a vcious circle isn't it~ how an eye for an eye makes everyone blind~ powerful~ excellent composition to bring the point home in a powerful mode~

Posted 14 Years Ago


A thinker.....many different ways the mind can take and interpret the lines. Fascinating domino effect.

Well written and great read. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is Excellent.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 30, 2010
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luciddreamer
luciddreamer

Carrollton, GA



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