the woman in a red dress is a monster i said

this is a short dark story of a woman who have gone mad

She beat her down and tear her heart out that woman is a monster

I said ! That woman in a red dress came to the ladys home that night  and beat her till she broken down .that lady screamed in pain praying to gods who never answer her .

 Wasn't the gods who should have answered her plead for help ? or wasn't all in her head ?

Night after night I watch her fall in pieces praying and begging the gods to help her . I said it again this woman in a red dress is a monster ! monster I said ! now tell me how can I help this lady tell me was this all in her head ,then why I could see this before my eyes .

AS the doctor looks her in the eyes and said miss rose you are both the woman and the lady .miss rose begins to screamed in pain the looks in her eyes was pure sorrow and dark.  

 

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