Admire Me

A freestyle poem of romantic admiration for those we know and those we don't.

Our momentary interactions replay in my mind relentlessly. Almost as often as the thought of you fluttering in my day dreams, commandeering my focus. Your self-perception conflicts with my affectionate idolization of your beauty. I fantasize of the moment you admire me the way I admire you. Unspoken hope and worry is constantly stomping my tongue and conscience. Flavors can no longer be tasted nor colors seen until the moment when i breathe your air and spend your time. I endlessly seek the opportune miracle of dwelling in the perfection which is you. Admire me as I admire you.

Reviews

[Devin Gates]

Really liked the word choice of "breathe your air and spend your time". I think this is a very clever poem.

[SilentEcho]

Your word choice is really exquisite. I particularly loved the “breathe your air and spend your time” line. Something truly beautiful about that.:)