If everyone would care

The mistakes of the world

If everyone would care
Our lives wouldn't be the same
If everyone wouldn't look
For somebody else to blame

Search for mistakes at your own
A better world starts with you
With young people, that, once grown,
Can change your life, your point of view

The world today is tearing apart
Breaking down, poisoning all
If people would only use their heart
Then maybe we could stop the fall

Author's Note

Found this today, I wrote it in 2007... what do you think?

Reviews

[Daniel Gardner]

So very true.... Well written.

[Terry Collett]

I like the optimism of the poem and the careful construction.