Forgotten Dreams

The sky, the field, the sea; 
The breeze and the willow tree; 
The stars, the call of the moon; 
Swans dancing upon the blue lagoon. 
  
The storm, the wind, the rain. 
Fire and minds going insane, 
knitting the unwoven seams 
of uncharted forgotten dreams. 

Reviews

[Ettol]

I like this very much, but I feel there should be more. Maybe more about the forgotten dreams?!

[MomzillaNC]

Great meter and rhyme and wonderful imagery.