An Angels Prayer

I got news today i was going to die,
So I'm on my knees praying dear spirits way up high,
When it is my time to go I ask for 3 things,
Firstly grant me my wish of Heavenly Wings.

To become a Guardian, A chance to Re-birth,
Help a soul Suffering or struggling on Earth.
Search any wrong doings and set them to right,
Keeping thoughts positive, Giving them strength to fight.

Please let me help those so desperately in need,
Those wanting to Take their Lives...Willing to Bleed.
For those people need Guidance, A Shoulder or an Ear,
Someone Invisible,Stood listening to their every Fear.
Take a hold of their hands and lead them to a light,
Show them a future so Happy, Cheerful and Bright.

My second request I ask that you see...
When I am ready to die, Take me quietly and pain free.
And lastly I beg of you before you set my soul free,
Give me the chance to say goodbye to my friends and family. x

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

What I like about your poem the most is the order of the three requests.
You placed the first request in your poem solely to the benefit of helping others
this is a genuine endearment of your humanity to man
I respect you and your wishes!

[louise]

Aww thankyou :) x

[Gee]

Putting all else before you even in the darkest hour,not many like that about.Very much enjoyed your poem Louise

[louise]

thankyou so much x

[aruntp Thalassery]

Desires...Desires....Desires....Desires kills a man with mental pain and agony....good desires and nice to read poem

[louise]

glad u enjoyed it x

[alifeacoustic]

Beautiful words from a heart wrenching dilemma, helping the unfortunate and thinking of them in your darkest hour. Great write.

[louise]

Im glad you liked it :) x