Eternal Love

Eternal Love

A Poem by lowena
"

He cannot seem to forget her after all these years.

"

 

He waited patiently on the platform, beneath the canopy.

Sheltering from the sleet that cruelly thrashed his weathered face.

His thick layers gave little comfort from the bitter wind.

He shoved his hands deep inside the pockets of his overcoat,

And stomped his feet repeatedly to arouse them from their slumber.

The station clock said 01:20.

The night porter had already passed by on his rounds, bringing him a warm cup of tea,

This gladly received on such a chilly night.

He had always taken pity on him.

Nevertheless, never once spoke of her, as if he sensed it was forbidden.

 

The hours passed little by little

on these cold nights.

Still, he never failed to show.

The urge to see her was too compelling.

He revisited the night it happened.

As clearly as if, it was yesterday.

It was a night just like this.

Rain battered off the street corners.

The howling wind drowned his voice as he called after her.

They had argued about something.

He could not remember what.

If only he had know how fragile she must have been.

He would have ran after her,

Told her how much he loved her.

Now years have passed.

Still he waits.

Willing her to show.

She had promised to come.

But then promises are not always for keeps.

He will wait every night,

Here, in this place, where he finds comfort from knowing she is near.

He will wait, until he catches a fleeting glimpse of her face.

He will wait, to see her golden hair catch the breeze.

He will wait, for her infectious smile to warm his heart.

He will wait, for another chance, to tell her

how much he loves her.

 

 

© 2008 lowena


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JRB
regret hope and love, sweet write,
Jan/uisiom

Posted 16 Years Ago


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AK
I think we've all sat in the rain and cold at this station a time or two waiting, regretting... hoping. This is very nicely done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is beautiful and also sad in a way! Very nice poem you have here and I can actually relate to him! I love your words! Great write if I must say so myself! :) Keep up the good work! One luv!


-JC-

Posted 16 Years Ago


The biting wind and weathered face reflect her
golden hair and , oh, yes ! This is it, this is love.

A very nice poem which captures the essence of
deep feeling.

Very well done.

---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 16 Years Ago


i like this very much....it is very hard to capture the raw feelings of love with words and I think you have done a great job...i felt it....

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful. You can feel the raw emotions from the man. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Im 35yrs old. Studied Art and Photography at college. I love romantic poetry that touches my soul. My passions include: Photography Art Poetry The changing seasons The beauty of the world People Medic.. more..

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