She was gone.

a friends experience about love...

He was her first,
she was his ordinary.
She was so in love with him.
He took it.
She did everything for their relationship
to live on.
He was appreciating it.
But was busy
not being contented with her.
He needs attention.
An attention that even she can't
figure out, what kind.
She tried, she failed, she cried.
He said, he loves her.
She believed.
She held on to what is important,
her love to him, their relationship.
Still she got her heart broken, he was never contented of her.
She was gone.
He... was alone.

Author's Note

hey ho! feel free to blast what's on your mind...
Your ideas and criticisms (if you have) is healthy for a starter like me.

Reviews

[WriterMe]

This was a pretty sensible write. I liked the thoughts you managed to portray here. Great work =]

Oh and thank you for the reviews =]

[Faceless Love]

Sometimes in love no one wins even if it their own doing. I enjoyed reading it.