depression

depression

A Poem by ☠☠☠☠☠

i sit and write all day long.
i never let anyone in
my imagination is a scary place
i let people take a peek 
and they dont talk to me again
if i open up
ill just be hurt more
being shunned hurts enough
the first time
but the second hurts even more
my walls are impenetrable 
no one has broken them down yet
ive opened them 
but its resulted in them snapping shut
no one
absolutely no one
will ever get to my soul
and my true feelings
ive made up my mind as a teenage
i will die alone

© 2010 ☠☠☠☠☠


Author's Note

☠☠☠☠☠
just a fast poem

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I Can Really Relate To This.
"i let people take a peek
and they dont talk to me again"
That Happens To Me. They Say "I Don't Judge" And Then They End Up Telling Everyone And Everyone Will Say I'm "Emo" For Being Depressed...

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow....you capture it perfectly. i know....

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ian
Pretty sad and... yeah... depressive...
It's sad when someone hurts you... cuz then you don't wanna let anyone in...
It's painful, 'cause then you're all alone... :(
Nice job...

Posted 14 Years Ago


i liked this, there was a lot of emotion in it and i can relate, good job! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2010
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