True Love

True Love

A Poem by dreamer :)

When i see an elderly couple,
It makes me want to cry tears of joy.
The way they look at each other,
The way they move together,
The way they hold hands,
The way they touch.

It just goes to show that no matter how old you are,
The sparks will still be there if you're in love.

The way they look at each other like,
They have been through it all together,
They spend every second loving each other,
And no matter what, they will always,
Always,
Always,
Love each other just as much as they did,
The moment they caught each others' eye.

© 2010 dreamer :)


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wow this is so true and it's a very nice poem. I agree with you all the way :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is cute yes..and also very innocent..beautiful as a white feather flying by..:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


sweet-sweet-sweet-jeeeez-
this heartless person might cry:)
i love this poem and then some!!!
the last verse says it all...

"The way they look at each other like,
They have been through it all together,
They spend every second loving each other,
And no matter what, they will always,
Always,
Always,
Love each other just as much as they did,
The moment they caught each others' eye."

james;-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha, This is cute. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


In a world where people fall in "love" as often as they change socks...it's nice to know that real love still exists.

We all need that hope. Age has nothing to do with the equation if the love is real.

I really liked this write and it's message... thank you for sharing :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awe this poem is cute. I agree because my grandparents are still together and have been going strong for over 40 years. And when I was visiting them they had their anniversary and my grandpa bought he roses. They were so pretty and that was a really sweet gesture. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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my parents have been together for 57 years and they are so tender together..they never had any one else...that's about as good as it gets..lovely touching tribute to love

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I absolutely love to write!!! It's so much fun, and I always find myself either in a great book, or writing my own little story. It's the only way to escape the real world, and still express your emot.. more..

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A Poem by dreamer :)