Love me, Love me not.

This describes my life-an emotional roller coaster.

You tell me you love me.
I feel like I'm on top of the world.
I sing and dance and laugh and smile.
I'm nothing without you.

You tell me you love her.
I feel like I'm at the bottom of the sea.
I sit and wait and cry and frown.
I'm nothing without you.

You tell me you love me.
I take you back for I love you.
I sing and wait and laugh and frown.
So many mixed feelings.

I may be desperate for you,
But I would never give you up,
Or waste my life waiting for you.
I'm nothing without you,
But what am I with you?

Author's Note

Sorry if it sucks! Just give me some feedback on how to make it better! Thanks!! :)

Reviews

[Natalie]

I really liked this. It was nice and sweet. I was able to paint in a piciture in my mind. I think you could have created more depth in your poem. Especailly when she was talking about how she felt when the guy said he didn't love her.But you did a great job and captured the joys and sorrow of love pretty well. :D

[dreamer :)]

thanks guys! it needs work but i think im just gonna start on some different pieces that are deeper. haha :)

[Love Is Dead]

this was good.At least there was honesty in here.great job

[J.S. Pua]

this is kind of nice..
i can see the honesty to this write..
but..
i guess you have to work on creativity..
but that's just me..

good..
just keep on writing..